There are some good things about this paper, Colleen. Your interview with your dad is excellent. The summary of events of 9/11 is good, but be sure to proofread your writing to catch misspellings and other errors. Your analysis of the economic effect didn't have quite enough hard facts. All in all, a good effort, but I think we can improve as the year goes on.
There are some good things about this paper, Colleen. Your interview with your dad is excellent. The summary of events of 9/11 is good, but be sure to proofread your writing to catch misspellings and other errors. Your analysis of the economic effect didn't have quite enough hard facts. All in all, a good effort, but I think we can improve as the year goes on.
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